Songwriting!
Today we'll look at song lyrics. First, think about a song whose lyrics you particularly like. In the comments, post links to these songs, either just the lyrics or the lyrics with music, and why you like them. We’ll take some time to check out the different songs we’ve posted and discuss them.
Next, the songwriting:
Start with a “mantra.” Think of a phrase you could say over and over to reflect a mood. Are you meditating to calm and relax yourself, enduring a physical activity like running, thinking of a person you have strong feelings about?
Now try to make that mantra “singable.” Try different versions of the wording. Think about the way the vowel and consonant sounds work together. Say it out loud–does it flow? Chant it–that is, say it without any particular variation of notes but in a rhythmic way. Does it have rhythm? Is it easy to say–and to sing?
Next, take a simple tune, for example, “Amazing Grace.” This is a very common structure for both poetry and songs; many of Emily Dickinson’s poems, such as “I heard a fly buzz when I died,” can be sung to this tune. This is, in technical poetry terms, a four-line stanza whose meter is iambic quadrameter interspersed with iambic triameter. The rhyme scheme would be ABAB or ABCB.
Less technically, this would be four stressed syllables alternating with three stressed syllables, though in music you might also make every measure (or line) four stressed syllables or beats. In between the beats or stresses, you can have as many unstressed syllables as you like, though two or three tends to work best. (Not all songs have four beats per measure; Pink Floyd's "Money" has a truly bizarre seven beats per measure, for example, but the vast majority go with four.)
Use the “mantra” as a refrain (like the chorus part of a song), and create a verse that can lead up to this refrain. Be flexible with your wording–pay attention to where you would normally stress a syllable in speech, and see if you can match that up to where you’d stress it in a song. The refrain itself could simply repeat the mantra line several times or else variations of that line.
Most of all, enjoy the writing process, as always. Write something that makes you want to sing!
The Gambler by fun. https://genius.com/Fun-the-gambler-lyrics
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my comfort songs! It's built around a pretty simple melody and arrangement, but I've always found the lyrics very beautiful--it's poetic, but in a deeply personal and intimate way. I don't have full background on the lyrics, but according to the internet, lead singer Nate wrote this song about his parents.
on a related note, though, i still cannot figure out why it's called the gambler
DeleteTaylor Swift Red https://genius.com/Taylor-swift-red-taylors-version-lyrics
ReplyDeleteI like this bc its a good song but also is useful for thinking about this project specifically because she uses colors to convey emotions.
Time Adventure by Rebecca Sugar
ReplyDeletehttps://genius.com/Rebecca-sugar-time-adventure-lyrics
I love this song and its lyrics, partly because it’s from one of my favorite cartoons and it played in the final episode, but I also love the theme. One of the themes/messages in the show is how history tends to repeat itself over and over again, and how people don’t necessarily live long enough to learn from previous mistakes and we’re doomed to repeat the same things over and over again. But another major theme is friendship and how it too, endlessly stretches across time as part of the human condition. It also reminds me of the Dr. Seuss quote: “Don’t be sad that it ended, be happy that it happened.”
https://spicey-maple-chicken-wings.tumblr.com/post/676002018418196480
ReplyDeleteWalk Like an Egyptian by the Bangles (https://genius.com/The-bangles-walk-like-an-egyptian-lyrics)
ReplyDeleteThere's not very much "depth" or "emotion" to it, it's just about how egyptians drew their people in strange ways.
Money Trees - Kendrick Lamar, Everything's Gonna Be Alright - Naughty By Nature, and Rock Bottom - Eminem are all about the choices that people in poverty face and have always struck me when I listen to them.
ReplyDeletehere is Money Trees if you have not heard it before https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smqhSl0u_sI
Passing Through by Kaden MacKay
ReplyDeletehttps://genius.com/Kaden-mackay-passing-through-cant-the-future-just-wait-lyrics
I love this one too because of its sound, but also the compelling lyrics about time. Wanting to pause it, have more of it, wasting it; it all comes together really well imo
Radio by Lana Del Rey. https://genius.com/Lana-del-rey-radio-lyrics
ReplyDeleteI like the melody of this song, and I also like the lyrics. "Now my life is sweet like cinnamon" is a simile that I really like in this song.
The Willow Maid by Erutan
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E52rxz2sjRs
This shows a good way of telling a story through song/music